#5 Free writing
I love to travel
When I was on vacation, traveling was my favorite leisure activity. I want to travel all over the world, traveling to all countries, look at the culture of different countries, increase knowledge.
I have been to Osaka, Japan, there is very leisurely, the scenery really was beautiful, spectacular monuments.
I have been to Bangkok, Thailand, There are a lot of special snacks there, authentic Thai milk tea is a good taste I can't forget.
I have been to Tokyo, Japan, where there is heavy snow, a snowy world, like a fairy tale, and even if it takes 5 degrees below zero, it is worth it. Tokyo is well-developed and the Tokyo Tower is unforgettable at night.
"The world is a book, but people do not travel read only one page." I love to travel. This is my motto.
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1. google translation : blu
2. Cambridge Dictionary : green
3. Linggle : red
1. google translation : blu
2. Cambridge Dictionary : green
3. Linggle : red
I love traveling too, Rose.
ReplyDeleteSome suggestions for your writing:
1. When I was on vacation, traveling was my favorite leisure activity. => Traveling is my favorite leisure activity. (No need to have two sentences).
2. I want to travel all over the world, traveling to all countries, look at the culture of different countries, increase knowledge. => I want to travel all over the world: to visit different countries, to experience different cultures, and to increase knowledge.